I have not been updating this blog lately 😅 I have been busy with a lot of workouts and writing! Here are some unfinished stories of mine:
The Orphanage of West Way
We sit at the long, oak table gazing at the shiny polish. Our repasts are destined to be bread and mash, although the — could possibly spare some soup on the side as well…
Girls surround me in every direction, their faces planted with ghastly stares. Cold lips and glistening eyes are composed in their lifeless faces.
Glancing at the oak table, I reverie my parents.
“Where did they go?” I wonder. What did I do?” Why did-.”
My thoughts seize their release as our repasts arrive. I reveal the dish. pulling off the cover to reveal, yet again, the familiar mash and bread.
The bread’s texture fails to be consumed, it’s hard, crusty and sour taste resulting. The math could have mistakenly identified as liquid, its runniness probably caused by an accidental dosage of water.
The Door
Genre: Horror/Mystery
Prologue
We stare at the door in front of us. I can sense the ominous gesture it makes from just a few feet.
“Shall we enter?” Max questions.
We look bearfully at the door, feeling frantic. But I, I was the only one opposed.
“We shall.”
Chapter 1: Ruby
“How was school?” asked Francis.
I pear at Francis. Her frames glint in the sunlight. Behind the glint, I can see her light hazel eyes filled with…fear? I sense the conversation will conclude divergently…
“Fine,” I play along. “How about you guys?”
Francis and I turn our sight to Rick and Kai. They catch our movement momentarily before turning back to their phones.
“Good,” Kai mumbles. Rick follows, saying, “Better than ever!” sarcastically.
We approach Francis’s house until we can near no longer. She lingers and slows her walking, falling behind our queue.
“Hurry up, Francis,” I rush, somewhat jokingly.
“Coming,” she says, unwillingly.
She finally enters the capacity of her front porch and waves to dismiss us. Before she can turn back, I see her eyes go wide and her mouth clench.
“What’s going on, Francis?” Kai asks, frantically.
We all notice her freeze as she turns to face us.
“Nothing,” she says with a forced smile. “I’ll see you guys-”
“We know something is up, Fran,” I announce, concerned. “Just tell us.”
Kai and Rick nod supportively.
She rubs her neck. “I don’t you guys getting dragged into this.”
The Day of a life of a Moonlark
Moonlarks are uncommon species of birds that are laid on oceans. The tide takes the eggs away from the shore, leaving baby moonlarks to fend on their own. However, a parent is constantly on the lookout for the safety of the bird and sings melodies of guidance for reassurance.
Comes from: KOTLC (Keepers of the Lost Things) by Shannon Messenger
I wake up in recall of my birth. Cool liquid surrounds me, acting as my only foundation. I scavenge for my mother, but no sound nor sight is to be heard or seen. I panic.
“Where is everyone?” I wonder.
Finally, I see an outline of another Moonlark.
“Mother?” I call.
The creature heads toward me, coming nearer by every step. The bird fails to understand my call and ignores my response.
I swerve slightly back. The Moonlark laughs at my cowardness.
Sorry, this story needs a bit of an edit 😅
I hope you enjoy reading my stories. I will try to update this blog more. Have a great day! 😊
Steve
I am so impressed by your writing style. Keep on writing! One day, the world will discover you.
ItsMe
SHANNON!! HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT WRITING??? Please make a post on how you write such detailed and awesome stories!! You should seriously become an author or something, my writing literally sounds like “The Very Hungry Caterpillar” lol BUT PLEASE MAKE A POST ON HOW TO WRITE AWESOME STORIES
Shannon Yan
Who are you? And thank you for the positive feedback!
TAKAKO
特にムーンラークはおもしろい。
どの物語も完成が楽しみですが、無理しないで下さい。
ゆっくり、のんびりと書いていけばいいのです。
今やらなければならないことが、たくさんあるのなら
それに専念して下さい。
私は、シートン動物記が大好きです。シートンの伝記も読みました。
動物が主人公の物語は、生きる知恵を学ぶことができます。
ジャック・ロンドンの「荒野の呼び声」も大好きです。
主人公の犬 バックは賢くて強い犬です。
去年、ハリソンフォード主演で映画になったと思います。
そのうち映画も見たいです。
本を読むことは、たいへん楽しいです。
でも物語を書くことは、とても頭を使います。
素晴らしい物語ができることを楽しみにしています。😊
TAKAKO
神秘的 幻想的 この物語から不思議な世界感が漂ってきます。
こんなにも人の心を奥深く追及する文章だから文学と呼ぶのでしょう。
オスカーワイルド、シェイクスピア ヘルマンヘッセ 等が
私は好きです。他にもたくさんいるけど。
忙しいことは良いことです。ブログを楽しみにしています😊💖。
でも無理しないで生活して下さい。
Shannon Yan
😊
SONNET OF COURSE 🥵🥵
SHANNON I LIKE UR WRITING
Anonymous
LOL THANK YOU HELLO SONNET